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Daffodils

by ranfuchs (writer), February 07, 2010

poem

Facing each other solemnly

At the edge of the daffodil garden
Two lone daffodils
Facing each other
Solemnly
Lonely
Thinking they are the only daffodils
In the entire world

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By Melody J Haislip on February 07, 2010 at 11:49 am

Oh, no, you can't make daffodils be sad. Daffodils are sunny and happy and full of giggles!

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By Jack Bates on February 08, 2010 at 04:37 pm

good writing can make even a daffodil sad, good job!

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By Askcherlock on February 09, 2010 at 06:14 pm

There are times in our lives when we all feel like those daffodils.

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By corisong1 on April 17, 2010 at 10:40 am

Daffy daffodiles. Go out and get your grove on! :-) xxxx

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